Another man, from Kin-tuck-ee
also had an ostomy
He read your poem, which made him smile
He thought, I'll rhyme you back awhile
He sat and set his brain to work
His duty to the forum, not to shirk
After a while, he began to fret
He couldn't get a rhyme just yet
His poor brain, he racked and racked
He just couldn't quite get the knack
Perhaps he'd have himself a smoke
That might give his brain a poke
Come on now brain, give me a rhyme
You've had long enough, it's high time
At last he thought, I've had enough
I just can't do this rhyming stuff
MMSH
mild_mannered_super_hero
Dec 13, 2012 1:05 am
christiesdad
Dec 13, 2012 3:05 am
MMSH,
If that is original and your own stuff---I take my hat off to you. Very good.
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Bill
Dec 13, 2012 11:21 am
Hello MMSH, I suppose it does look better done in separated lines and it's easier to read. Nonetheless, I also liked it as it was the first time I read it as it has a sort of appeal that comes with my own struggles to find line-breaks rhymes and punctuations. Perhaps we can have some more when you get the 'urge'.
Best wishes Bill
Best wishes Bill
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