Reply to bill w.

another man, from kin-tuck-ee



also had an ostomy



he read your poem, which made him smile



he thought, i`ll rhyme you back awhile



he sat and set his brain to work



his duty to the forum, not to shirk



after a while, he began to fret



he couldnt get a rhyme just yet



his poor brain, he racked and racked



he just couldnt quite get the knack



perhaps he`d have himself a smoke



that might give his brain a poke



come on now brain, give me a rhyme



you`ve had long enough, it`s high time



at last he thought, i`v had enough



i just cant do this rhyming stuff



MMSH

MMSH,

If that is original and your own stuff----Itake my hat off to you.  Very good

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Hello MMSH,   I suppose it  does look better done in separated lines and it's easier to read. Nonetheless, I also liked it as it was the first time I read it as it has a sort of appeal that comes with my own struggles to find line-breaks rhymes and punctuations.  Perhaps we can have some more when you get the 'urge'.

Best wishes  Bill

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Too cute!

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